I am writing a story and I need a new idea for it can you help?

Question

it's for phil of the future...will you read it (it's short) and help me come up with an idea for what to make happen next.

click on the link and the chapters are on the top, right corner.

thanks and an easy 10 points to anyone who cares to help!

thanks so much!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3527481/1/Phil_In_His_Future

Answer 1

It was a great story I hope I could read the rest.

I think the older sis will get a really bad cramp and started drowning and her friend was trying to save, but the olde sis was too heavy. And it just so happens that the boy she kissed was passing by and he saved her, but she swallowed a lot of water and the boy had to do CPR to save her.

Oh yeah what year are they in?