I badly need the help of those who have a knowledge of El Filibusterismo!!?

Question

i created a script for our play in El Fili. So I need criticists for my work. For those who Are

willing to read it then judge it. You can also edit it for the smooth flow of the play.

My classmates prefer the play not so poetic (makata) and we prefer not to have a narrator.

Just answer this and I will send to you the Script attached to my email(10 chapters only).

It looks terrible but I don't know how can I make it Better.Tnx in advance guys..

Answer 1

i believe you should ask your groupmates regarding this one. try not to do everything on your own, that's why you're in a team. it's not an individual project. try delegating your tasks among your classmates.

Answer 2

Well what are the rules set by your teacher? Do you have to follow every chapter of the book? or can you just stick with the main plot points? Is it a musical? Are you the only writer on board? I can take a look at it, and give you feedback  Btw I won't edit your dialogue, just see if you need to tighten the pace.