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I believe it all goes a lil' somethin' like this...?

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CYCLE

life

food water

breathing

safety

resistance from

world outside

family

feeling love friendship

and belonging

confidence will

hopes built upon respect

striving feeds resolve

individual

thinking working figuring

affecting change through self

Mastery over all

True leader of the universe

Name carved in stone: LEGACY

-swoosh

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I like it. Interesting. Takes confidence to write without punctuation. Needs no critiques.
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yeah thats all tru =]
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was this a poeam, becuase it lacked total structure. It was more like a list of insignifigant spelling words.
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bump that "insignificant idiot" that was cool and the Title wraps it all up. It was real true and that fact you put it all under the same subject its a poem that you read twice at first but the blend is hot.You got my props!
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niffty. I like it
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