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I came across an old poem I had written for my ex-bf, first love, and I wanted to know if it was even any good

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I never saw it coming, you caught me so off-guard. You walked into my life, and just like that, it hit me, you're the one I've been looking for. Never have I fallen, but I am quickly on my way, and there is nothing stopping me. I like the way you go about doing the things you do. You hold a spell under me, making me dream of what it could be, to have your smile directed towards me. There is something about you, I just can't get in my head, or shake off my mind, I'm dying to know if I could ever leave you behind. I love the way you say "I love you", and the way you're always there, knowing that I could never find that feeling with anyone, anywhere.

Is it any good, or is it terrible?

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  1. its very puppy love cliche


  2. I THINK ITS JUST FINE!!!!!

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