I change my Monarch Deck up a bit... can anyone rate it and help make it faster/better?

Question

I want to make this deck able to compete in this current format, so ANY advice from GOOD yugioh players is greatly appreciated. Main deck is 40 cards btw =)

Monsters x20

Jinzo

Caius the Shadow Monarch (3)

Raiza the Storm Monarch

Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch

Mobius the Frost Monarch

Cyber Dragon (2)

Twin-Headed Behemoth

Snipe Hunter

Masked Dragon (2)

Gravekeeper's Spy (2)

Sangan

Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Spell Striker

Marshmallon

Spirit Reaper

Spells x14

Lightning Vortex (2)

Monster Reborn

Premature Burial

Brain Control

Heavy Storm

Giant Trunade

Creature Swap

Swords of Revealing Light

Smashing Ground

Fissure

Enemy Controller

Book Of Moon

Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps x6

Mirror Force

Magic Cylinder

Zoma the Spirit

Compulsory Evacuation Device (3)

Again, I really need pro advice so I know what I can do to counter DAD's, DDT's, swarms, etc. And for the people that are going to say "add Treeborn" I'm, not since he's only a good early draw...

Answer 1

limit your self to one of each monarch so that your deck can speed up and add in some power ful lv fours instead of masked dragons use stuff that helps bringout the monarchs faster and as a fail safe throw in a cyber jar

Answer 2

6.5/10

lose the Twin-Headed Behemoth, Snipe Hunter, Masked Dragons, Smashing Ground, Fissure, Sangan and Creature Swap (8)

try to get two more zomas there excellent all around cards for a monarch deck and get 3 hydrogedons and 3 nimble momongas (8)