I created and wrote out this spell, i really wud like to know what u think!?

Question

witches one and witches all

i ask a favor from you

to be a human when dry

and a mermaid when wet

with a tail that shines a deep, deep blue

just a tail, a beautiful tail

Gills, i do not need

powers i shall not have

only water on my legs

will transform me

please, give this gift to me

pelase tell me what i may need to add,what else i may need, and what i shud take away!!

no rude comments pelase, its just so...well rude, i wud strongly appriciate it if u would all be nice!

Answer 1

hey umm you should rhyme?!?!?!?! and umm u cant use me 2 times in a spell but if you want 2 know more send me an email and we can chat about magic i love talking about magic spells!

My email is [e-mail] ok?

Answer 2

"MAGIC,..FROM THE DEEP,...

MAGIC,..FROM WITHIN ME,...

SPIRITS OF THE WIND,....

ELEMENTS OF THE RAIN,....

NEPTUNE'S...EAR HEAR MY PAIN,...

THIS IS WHAT MY SOUL DESIRE,...

TURN ME INTO A MERMAID,....

WITH A TAIL OF BLUE,..DEEP BLUE THAT IS,...

THIS IS WHAT I ENQUIRE,..OR IS IT INQUIRE,...

DOES HAYWIRE SOUND BETTER,..OH OH,..WHAT RHYMS WITH FIRE,...DESIRE,.....FLAT TIRE,....

STUCK IN THE MIRE,....NICE ATTIRE,....I SAW SOME

PRETTY GOOD ANSWERS A LITTLE WHILE AGO,...

AGAIN,...RELAX,..HONEY,..IF IT'S MENT TO BE,..

SO YOU SHALL RETURN TO SEA,...IF A MERMAID

THERE YOU WAS,....SO BE IT AGAIN,...WELL,..JUST BECAUSE,.....;),..

Answer 3

Is this a joke or a poem or do you really believe this could work.

Answer 4

not being rude, but witchcraft, and magick is a sin, and you will blister for all eternity in the deepest pits of h**l

Answer 5

Love it :) It it has good rhyme and sounds like a poem, just like spells should! :)

Answer 6

The incantation is great except for one thing. Witches have NOTHING to do with transforming you into a mermaid. Witches didn't write the spell on 43things.com. Somebody thought it was a cute idea, but I can guarantee you it wasn't a witch. I am not a teenager, I am much older than you think. I've been a practicing witch for many years and I am telling you the truth when I say that witches cannot physically transform your human body into a mermaid. You can choose not to believe me, that's your prerogative, but it won't make what I am saying any less true. Those that claim to have a spell, or claim to have really PHYSICALLY become a mermaid are simply not being truthful.

Answer 7

it's pretty and all but i don't know what you would do with this spell.

Answer 8

It would seem to me that your meter is a bit off on your incantation.

It's hard to tell written out. Its easier the guage the meter and tempo if you can hear the writer reading it.

By the way...why no gills?

Answer 9

It's a nice little poem.  The truth is that just having a spell isn't going to do you any good.  Most spells require energy-charged gemstones and various other artifacts, plus the mage needs to be experienced enough to perform it.  

If you send me a message, I can give you the real mermaid spell.  It won't do you any good unless you get someone who can use magic to cast it on you.