I don't know about this coffee, can someone help me brew it better?

Question

Caffeine Imbued?

Just invented something, I did.

Fabulous…unbelievable!

Am still giggling and I mean giggling,

and for a neon man, that’s indeed

something!

Mixed some secret ingredients,

bombarded it with juice… real juice.

Zapped it again, I like to zap,

and the powder started glowing.

Amazing!

My faithful dog had left the room

didn’t want to be the pig called guinea.

Thought about my honey but… nah.

She might not like this idea,

so I swallowed

Wow is all I got to say as I giggled

If flying was this easy… why Avis?

And who needs Marvel anymore

when they see me, the self made flyer

Neonman!

On my second trip round I stopped.

Only so many sunrises in a day!

And it is hard to giggle at supersonic!

What a pill, a happy flying pill, replete

with giggles!

But something did not feel right

perhaps this pill had side effects?

Something warm, burning, searing

in my lap. d**n! I spilt my coffee.

Reality!

Better check what I put in that pot!

Good Morning All!

Answer 1

cool poem...one edit: "and it's hard to giggle when supersonic"... I'd use "it's" because it sounds more in keeping with the voice of the poem and "when" instead of "at" before "supersonic" unless you want to add "speeds" after "supersonic"...now I have to go try something exotic in the galley...got to see if I can recreate your brew for the crew.

Answer 2

I'll have what the boys in the back room are drinking.  Whatever would we do without our brew? (Yeah, G.J. tea work also...I think.)

(Swatting at the little box...gads, computer program can say Hmmm?)

Answer 3

So this is the poetic form of the "Speed of Light".....very racey Neon.

Answer 4

Man, all I gots is the Kroger brand. Now if you'll excuse me I'm going to go get a cup and read that again. GM.

Answer 5

Wow....what exactly did you put in that drink? Hehe

This was a great read to get me going this morning!

Answer 6

Whatinhellare you drinking?  Kikapoo joy juice??  Enjoy the trip, put a cool cloth on the burn and quit making me snort coffee at the monitor!

Answer 7

I'll have what you're having, then, maybe I'll be able to write a poem as good and as funny as this one.

Answer 8

Hot coffee spilled on self, really makes one jump.

Certainly a jump start on a jivy poem this A.M. Kudos.

Answer 9

WEEEEEEEE!!!

Being that you were out of your mind when you spilt your coffee you can sue your "self" for a bazillion dollars.

Great fun I had reading this!

Good morning!

Answer 10

"Hi!",

"Good morning too you!

It was a wonderful joyous day too day.

may you have the same.

'hmm, nice hot cup of coffee with one small teaspoon of cadburry's  drinking chocolate, 3 teaspoon sugar, 4 marshmallow's melted and opt. milk though best without. Great idea!'

Going to get mine now

Wonderful G.M poem to finish my wonderful evening.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

P.S: Thanks for bring me some rain tonight, Well storm actually with slight ice hail. Your rain poem wasn't Instamatic   like Cynthia's but by 4: PM this afternoon it ice hailed for the first time this year. so I have now got some form of water back in my water tank. Yipee....: )

Answer 11

I love coffee, all kinds, but my favorite would have to be Brazillian, brewed in a coffee sock, so thick that the spoon can stand in the middle of it...whatever you put in yours sounds good. When can I come over?

Answer 12

Since you can make up a concoction to fly;

then I just made up a concoction to put my arm through the monitor.

Look out, I just stole your cup.

Please read mine. I always value your opinions.

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 13

What a fantastic mood you are in to-day....loved this, it comes hurtling of the page as a spontaneous, happy, couldn't-give-a-d**n poem.

Lovely stuff.