I don't know if this short poems any good please read and reply?

Question

Slowley the time

passes away,

Ages gone by all history,

An endless void,

Into the abyss,

No one can hold,

and no one will miss.

Answer 1

Time doesn't pass slowly.

Voids are not endless but empty

History is actually recorded

and regarded as important.

You should have written poem's

and Slowly

Read poetry, lots of it

Answer 2

i think this poem is excellent, thank you