I don't know what this is, but i'd love your opinion.?

Question

i dont even know how this happened.. my fingers just started typing this.. poem? rant? i'm not sure. it was unbelievable really. my hands had a life of their own.

You cry, I watch.

You laugh, I stand.

Emotionless once again.

I can not feel my heart beat anymore.

What left inside I am not sure.

Who I was, was once so clear.

Who I am is far from here.

I want to smile.

I want to breathe.

But every breath is far from reach.

If only living was easy to teach.

Answer 1

wow. thats an amazing poem. jeeze i cant believe it just came to you! thats amazing its got a really deep meaning. do you feel like that is true in your life sometimes? wow thats really good!!!

Answer 2

wow

Answer 3

that is so beautiful... its so deep and thought-provoking... i think its awesome...