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I got into a big fight with gf and she wants a poem. help?

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ok so basically we been together for one year and i was so distant even though i shouldnt have been and when she wanted 2 break up now i realized what she means to me and were good now i guess all along she wanted me to open up to her and i finally did but i still want to really show her im sorry and she means a lot. i remmeber a few months ago she wanted me to write her a poem.. shes big on poems.. but i dont know anything about them. my hobbies involve soccer, magic

my major is psych my minor is bio

im so far away from ela that i dont know the first thing about it!

how can i write her a good poem? they dont have 2 rhyme right? can they just be like lines written out or augh i dont knoww..

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  1. Wow, what a predicament! If it's too good, she'll know you copied it or got help and if it truly sucks she might maybe give you credit for trying... Flip a coin, friend. Maybe this will help...

    U.R.

    You are the moment

    You are quotient

    You are the part missing

    That completes me

    You are the window

    You are the castle

    You are the shelter from the cold

    Eternally

    I'll give you everything but my heart

    Cause I need it to love you

    My magic can not get me by

    So what you gonna give in return?

    What do I need to do?

    From the corner of my eye

    It was you

    You are a sweet seduction

    My own corruption

    That's what you are

    You are a perfect example

    Too hot to handle

    That's what you are

    U.R.

    U.R.

    U.R.

    U.R.


  2. maybe you can copy s*x and the city and just give her the book that has the greatest love letters of all time....

    she will be impressed that you thought to do something like that, since you aren't that good with words, and if she mentions it being from s*x and the city...tell her you were hoping that she would say that, because your love for her, is a big as Big's love is for Carrie!!

  3. lol here ya go.....

    I'm not gonna write you a love song

    'cause you asked for it

    'cause you need one,

    you see

    I'm not gonna write you

    a love song

    'cause you tell me it's

    Make or break in this

    Or you're on your way

    I'm not gonna write you to

    stay

    If all you have is leavin',

    Imma need a better reason

    To write you

    a love song today, today, yea

  4. There are all sorts of different types of poems.. I suggest looking them up on the internet and finding a format you like.  Your new to it, so don't expect too much from yourself.  If you put some good effort into it, then she'll know and it's the thought that counts.  Good luck!

  5. relax. you know what a poem is. you're correct--it doesn't need to rhyme. the cool thing about poetry is there really aren't any hard rules. the key is be yourself, be honest and don't be afraid to put yourself on paper. Sounds like she's a big fan, so the more personal it is the more she'll probably like it. You obviously want to say some things so remember the important thing here is to do it. Don't worry about it being good. She knows this is new for you. Go for it dude.

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