I have a poem, comments please.?

Question

Tuff Man

Nice Horse

Strong Hands

s**y Voice

Full of Confidence

Having Fun

Working Hard

Till Day Is Done

No Need to Remind Me

We are Worlds Apart

But to Me you are a Champion

You Stole my Heart

Tuff Man

Nice Horse

Did I Fall In Love

h**l Yeah Of Course

Answer 1

Honestly it's not bad except for two things I didn't personally like

1.Writting tuff instead of tough

2.The ending "h**l yeah" I dont know i think you started of well and then the ending wasnt as good...

Keep it up though..

P.S this is just if this is indeed meant to be a poem.

As a song I think its really good.

As a poem its alright.

Answer 2

sounded like a rhythm for a song.

Answer 3

I love the rhythm.

Answer 4

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think!

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!

Answer 5

Doggerel.