I have a song I would like your opinion on!?

Question

Yesterday will be a memory

Tomorrow an impossibility

I stand upon this pedastal

It will pave my personal road to h**l

Dying to live, Living to die

Sharpen the blade and end my life

Remember her face

Your last disgrace

Silence my only friend

The only thing there in the end

[Chorus]

Carve her name into your arm

Bring your life mortal harm

You will never see the dawn

Always bein' second best

Jab the knife into your chest

No regrets!

[Chorus]

You fantasize the agony

Oh how much you would be pleased

As you bow onto your knees

You realize your destiny

Take away your life

End your world of spite

Fight it off with might

You'll only end the light

The world is in your hands

You have the master plan

Be you god or man

Mortality demands

[Chorus]

Carve her name into your arm

Bring your life -- mortal harm

You will never see the dawn

Always bein' second best

Jab the knife into your chest

---No regrets!

[Chorus]

You push the trigger

Answer 1

Very good!

Answer 2

The emotional influence is obviously there.. and the lyrics are pretty powerful; I especially like "The world is in your hands / You have the master plan / Be you god or man / Morality demands" - in a situation where suicidal thoughts become overwhelming, the world is literally in your hands, as you make that decision to end your life or not, so I think that stanza is emphasized pretty well. Overall, I like the lyrics (: