I have abook idea names????????

Question

im 15 myself and i know this idea isnt to good but idk please tell me why it sucks or its good idk please help! it needs a name!

....two sisters ones older like 20 one is like 15 the older one like RAISED her they are like best friendsthe mom was abusive no father in the pictureyounger sister ended up killing the mom in a fight but the case wasnt investigated to farthey now live in an aparment and do and deal cocain for moneythe older sister gets shot at during a deal gone bad at the fault of the younger sister basicly she goes in the hospital the younger sister goes insane because of the shooting she is still tramatized from the graphic death of her mom a week later her sister dies the younger sister goes COMPLEATLY insaneand kills guy who killed her sisterthen was imediatly put in jail for life because of the killing and cocain what you think??

ps i know it needs to be happier what should i do?at the end should i make the younger sister succsesful?

Answer 1

yeah, what everyone else said. how could you not pick mine for best answer now? i have the same answer as everyone. mmuuuuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhahahhahaahahha! but for some weird reason, this never works.....no just kidding. send me an e-mail at [e-mail] and i'll send you back a list of all the names for people I have come up with. They're really sci-fi-ish though because although I'm a writer myself, I write more fanasy stories. If you were talking about a name for the book, maybe PAIN or SISTERS or something really simple, but powerfull. hope i helped! i think you should definately go with making the younger sister successful at the end and throughout the story mention what she wants a LOT and then, at the end make her achieve her real goal. it could be a job she wanted or something like she wanted to be free of drugs.

Answer 2

No, that wouldn't make sense, but you need to cut down on the killings and insanity.  It wouldn't have much impact if, one after another, everyone goes insane and kills people.  You usually wouldn't start with a name for a book.  You write it (perhaps under what is called a working title) and then come up with a name from the book itself.  

Answer 3

I think it's good. ^^ Though you need to come up with a story behind why the mother is abusive. And why they don't have a father.

I think it should be.. sort of happy. Maybe, if you're religious, the person she shares the jail cell with is a Christian and teaches her about Jesus, and she's saved.

Or, if you're not, the ending could be sad, and you could have her find a way to kill herself in jail?

Those are probably awful ideas, I know. I'm just trying to be helpful.