I have created this spell, please share ur opinions?

Question

witches one and witches all

i ask a favor from you

to be a human when dry

and a mermaid when wet

with a tail that shines a deep, deep blue

just a tail, a beautiful tail

Gills, i do not need

powers i shall not have

only water on my legs

will transform me

please, give this gift to me

no negative comments please and thank u!! tell me what i may need to add, change, get rid of , anyhitng!!

Answer 1

I think it is very interesting, and cute. You should try some other spells and enchantments. I do not believe that this will work however i could be wrong. :3 Good luck.

Answer 2

......yyeeeaaaaaaahhhhhh... keep dreamin' fairy princess.

Answer 3

good spell

Answer 4

er..... would make a......good.......poem.... heh.

Answer 5

To know, to will to dare, to KEEP SILENT!

Answer 6

No matter how hard you try you will not be able to turn yourself into anything else then what you are...the fact that you want to suggests that you should work on some self esteem issues that you may have as you clearly aren't happy in your skin.

You have watched to many movies...instead of watching charmed actually do some reading on witch Craft where it came from and what the people who practised it actually stood for and what you can actually achieve, where the limits are etc.

Answer 7

I didn't know people made spells anymore and I haven't really ever read any but I guess thats ok.....?

Answer 8

cool

i

like

it

Answer 9

Witches don't have the power to turn you into a mermaid.  Sorry.  You might try appealing to a pagan or heathen god instead.

Answer 10

A pretty rhyme is NOT a spell -_- Spells are elaborate rituals that are used to meet a goal, something possible and obtainable.

A rhyming couplet will not turn you into a mermaid, no matter how many episodes of Charmed you watch.

Answer 11

ANNTIE "EM,...ANNTIE EM,...

Toto,..Totoooo,...

and you,..and you,....were there,....witch of the east,and west

answer this girl,...so that she may begin,...

or even end her Quest,.....baby,..relax,...

you got some pretty good answers,...earlier,...

how old are you,..........

Answer 12

WARNING TO ALL OTHER READERS!

Do NOT try this out, it is a trap!  I just decided to try it out just for fun and my car just exploded outside.  I am going to hire a team of psychic lawyers to apprehend you and send you to a top-secret government containment chamber where you belong, witch!

Answer 13

u could always just u kno...get plastic surgery on ur legs and make urself into the mermail...

Answer 14

No comments.

Answer 15

OK, so I'm telling you for the fourth time now......the incantation is great except for one thing. Witches have NOTHING to do with transforming you into a mermaid. Witches didn't write the spell on 43things.com. Somebody thought it was a cute idea, but I can guarantee you it wasn't a witch. I am not a teenager, I am much older than you think. I've been a practicing witch for many years and I am telling you the truth when I say that witches cannot physically transform your human body into a mermaid. You can choose not to believe me, that's your prerogative, but it won't make what I am saying any less true. Those that claim to have a spell, or claim to have really PHYSICALLY become a mermaid are simply not being truthful.

Answer 16

ok wicked witch of the west........if you don't want negative comments, stop posting stupid s**+** like this.

Answer 17

you cannot become a mermaid. unless you are born that way you cannot change who you are.

Answer 18

oh great Poseidon of the sea i call  ye i ask of  ye to change my body to the mermaid i wish  to be from the elements of earth and water and from the sea i cast my spell upon me so mote it be be said and cast three times there so mote it be....