The last was written right here and posted, now with comments and edits taken into consideration I have come up with this. Does it read better?
Urban Explorer
There is another world around us
secrets lurking in every brick wall
down every dark forsaken alley,
hidden truths left crying out:
feel me, see me, uncover me!
Battered architecture, mistreated
eternal destruction their fate, soon forgotten.
Crumbled memories atop urban land,
will the spirits live when nothing stands?
How many dreams were dreamt
beside this window, now glassless and cold?
Stories dance on perishing floors
never told, yet living and breathing
inside those minds that imagine.
Live to wonder, discover, and find,
how much waits to be found?
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