I have some English sentences I need help with?

Question

I need your opinions on these sentences that I have written. Are there any misspellings, grammar errors or anything I can do to improve them?

The text is taken from the Newweek at 8th of August, 2005.

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However, even after a lot of years with research, biofuel is only a small part of the overall fuel that is used for cars, planes, etc.

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Fuel such as gasoline and diesel still makes up the most part.

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Governments across the globe are becoming more concerned of global warming, therefore biofuel is greatly welcomed.

Answer 1

The text is taken from the new week at 8th of August, 2005.

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However, even after a lot of years with research, bio-fuel is only a small part of the overall fuel that is used for cars, planes, etc.

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Fuel, such as gasoline and diesel still makes up the most part.

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Governments across the globe are becoming more concerned of global warming, therefore bio-fuel is greatly welcomed.

Answer 2

Most of it's really well written, apart from the third sentence.

'Fuel such as gasoline and diesel still makes up the most part.'

Though I can understand you could have the information of what "the most part" is, you really shouldn't write a sentence like that.

'Fuel, such as gasoline and diesel, still make up the most part of such-and-such.'

This would be much better.

Answer 3

The text is taken from the Newsweek edition of August, 2005.

However, even after years of research, biofuel is only a small part of the overall fuel that is used for cars, planes, etc.

Since governments across the globe are becoming more concerned with global warming, biofuel is now greatly welcomed.