I have to make a weekly newsletter how does this sound?

Question

Happy Spring

Warm weather is finally here !the children and i have been very busy talking about things that grow . we started the week by planting some flowers, made a chart about things that can grow and things that cant grow. we practice counting by counting seeds inside a apple and talked about other fruits that has seeds inside of it . we also made flowers out of tissue paper and paper plates.

This week we will be making homemade growth chart with construction paper , experimenting with celery to see plants drink water and talking about what helps us grow. we are also expecting a visitor from the pet store and he will be giving the children some educational, hands on experience about how to help pets grow into healthy animals . we are looking froward to this week of exciting fun. If you have any question about what we are doing this week please feel free to contact me at 555-5555.

Sincerly Michelle

Answer 1

sounds good - click your spell check before printing it out - lots of typos and grammatical errors - that will make it look more professional and that's what spell check is for!

Answer 2

Yeah I think that looks pretty good,

A couple of the i's need made into a capitals and capitals letters put at beginning of sentences. You have also put practice instead of practiced in the 3rd line.

I'm not totally sure about the sentence "experimenting with celery....."  that doesn't seem to flow too well but it is ok.

Good luck with it, whatever its for :-)