I have written a few short-long poems before, and am wondering what people think about this one in particular?

Question

Beauty

Beauty is something we all have inside.

some times we can't see it though we may have tried.

There may be some times when we think it's not there,

when we don't have make-up, or glamorous hair.

But still there are times when we doubt who we are,

when we're all alone, or with friends in a car.

Made in God's image, glimses of light,

wheather it's during the day or the night.

We so often wish that our lives weren't the same,

and may even trade it for fortune and fame.

But if all our lives went exactly as planned,

this world would have changed from the way it began.

True beauty is found in the depths of our hearts,

hidden away in the deepest of parts.

So when there are times you feel bad in your skin,

Thank God for the beauty that's hidden within.

Answer 1

It is everything a short-long poem should be.....not too short, not too long.

Answer 2

wow.

thats really good!

just a piece f advice though....dont go posting too much stuff online (unless you want someone to copywrite it)