I have written a poem on my own. So can u please edit and find out the mistakes in this poem?

Question

My Skates

My name is SUPER-K

Polished yellow and black strips,

Are the secret to my beauty.

This is my special feature.

But then what’s the use?

Nowadays no one is even bother,

To have a look at me.

I’m just like a dead bee.

As my master is free,

He is using me without cease.

Raise inside me a feeling of glee.

“What’s the secret of your happiness, please?” asked my pal.

And I replied ‘I count my blessings one by one, this makes life sweet as honey.’

Answer 1

The message is really not all that clear--I find myself scratching my head--perhaps I am missing something--I think it needs some work

Answer 2

I was kinda lost- i didn't know what to think about it... is it just me or ..? huh.

Answer 3

Little Einstein,

Albert would be upset if he knew you spelled his last name in vain, but if it was an name availibilty thing, then I'll understand! So who writes poems about skateboards or rollerskates? Adventurous young men like yourself who define freedom with every carve and shred you make! This would make some good hip hop stanzas. A talking skateboard, (NO WAY!!) Mike check ah 1 - 2, ah 1 - 2... time to spit, yeah...

LET'S ROLL

I named my skates Rock-N-Roll Super K/Cuz they carve and they shred in a serious way/To and fro how will I blaze the trail today?/This is the secret to my beauty and freedom/But nowadays no one really even bothers/Spending all their time at the arcades or the harbors/ I see fathers grab the arms of their daughters I don't want you hanging around with him/My rider catches air that's what sets him free/ Sometimes he gets so abusive and like to disturb the peace/Hey what's your secret his pal's board would say to me/All you do is let go all of your fears/I was custom made polished with black and yellow stripes/And just like an Escalade, I was born to bring the hype/The BMXer's scream "NO WAY"  as I shred another pipe/900 degree turns the whole crowd cheers/Let's roll...