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I hope someone can rewrite my English..?

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I am a self Eng student. I appreciate if somebody can help me out my questions below.

How much did you give to buy this?

How much did you pay for this?

I bought this by $3

I gave 10 dollars to buy this

I paid $ 3 to buy this

I am falling asleep automatically as It is very warm here.

--> Are there other words replace of automatically?

Thanks..

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  1. I bought this for $3.

    I paid $3 for this.

    I gave $3 to pay for this

    my concern is that you do not fall asleep automatically more like:

    I cannot help but to fall asleep because it is very warm here.


  2. You should have put "I am a self-taught English student" and not shorten it to "Eng."

    Your first 2 questions are all right.

    3. I bought this for $3  (instead of "by $3").

    4. okay--you just wrote out the amount as 10 dollars instead of $10.

    5..okay

    6. Instead of using "automatically as" , put "I am falling asleep because it is very warm here."

  3. I am a self taught English student and I would appreciate it if someone could help me out by answering the questions below:

    How much did I pay for this? or How much did it cost to buy this?

    How much did you pay for this? This is fine

    I bought this for $3.00.

    I paid $10.00 for this.

    I paid $3.00 for this.

    I keep falling asleep because it is very warm here.

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