I just starting writing a fiction story, i need guidance from someone experienced?

Question

The story has just started, i have no idea where its going. Read it and give me advice? Include email address so i can send it, it is less than a page in Microsoft word but it won't fit in here

Answer 1

hi guy itoo wrote  but i feel it never bet yours to create or to write  is

FIRST CREATE THEW CHRCTOR

THINK THE POWERS & PHYSIC

NEXT CHECK OPUT THE FRINGES OF THE STORY

KEP IN MIND THE CLINAX

SEARCH  YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT THE CITY HE LIVE

AND FINALLY THE RELATION OF VILLIAN T OTHERS

AND CREATE some secrets that realm automatically at the END

then it finds surpprising to the reader ([e-mail] )  MY EMAIL I.D