I just want 2 know what ppl think of my poems (good or bad)

Question

I CRY

I cry all the time

but never for anyone to see

I cry like it is a crime

behind locked doors and I have the key

I lock the door and let no one in

so no one will have to see me when I am sad

they would have to pick the lock with a pin

if they wanted to come in that bad

but who world want in just to see me cry

they always walk by with out a care all the time

when they asked what I have been doing I just lie

I cant let them know I was committing a crime

Answer 1

Yes, you are pretty good.  Seems as though you've been writing a while.  Keep it up, it only gets better. Your topic was sad and interesting, I think we have all felt a little like that at some point. Check out a few of mine, you might relate. (in my questions, like you)

Answer 2

yessss! you're good at writing poetry girl!!!!

i loved it!

Answer 3

its lovely... its simply .....gr8

Answer 4

Yes, I liked it too.  People who walk by you seemingly without a care have their own problems, that's why they don't notice you.  They probably have bigger problems than you do.

Answer 5

Very nice.  Crying is only a crime when you run out of tears.

Keep writing.

Best Wishes

Answer 6

wow I love this one too. reminds me of someone.