I just wrote this awhile ago i really like this one ?

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baby you can be my emily and i will sing these words for you they go a lil something like this you can be my hand to hold my sholder to lean on my lover oh my lover just tell me you want this too take my hand and say baby i do cuz belive me this time has been long as h**l with out you and you need to come back we need to lay in the grass and laugh like lovers once again looking into to your eyes i remember everything the summer nights were hot but we made them hotter so take my hand and promise me you love me forever and ever cuz i promise you that i will love you as long as the sky is blue and the grass green and for better or worse baby you can be my everything

Answer 1

I like it :)

Answer 2

;)

Answer 3

Good.

Answer 4

I think that was really good! Such dedication!

Answer 5

I love that!

Answer 6

in the format you choose to present this, it is nothing more than one long run on sentence, no line breaks are shown, no punctuation  

it is quite unintelligible

Answer 7

its rlly good i have that song on my iPod

Answer 8

I like it a lot

could you read/rate my poem?

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