I made a new poem check it out ?

Question

Sitting here trying to find something to write i cant seem to forget that night the night i let it all go when i walked away from you my tear soaked shirt filled with emotions i promise baby i promise i will never leave and now I'm walking away from the only thing that made me feel that way so i have a feel words left to say please baby don't let me walk away don't let me say this is good bye cause i miss you now more then ever i feel so empty sitting alone with my thoughts that are left over like the dinner from last night that i ate alone i pick up the phone bu i just couldn't get past the dial tone there was so much left to say the words i taught of slip off my tongue when i talk to you the truth is baby i love you i need you and i miss you with all my heart i just want to say sorry I'm sorry for walking away I'm sorry.

Answer 1

way cool

Answer 2

...sweet!

Answer 3

the plain white tees should hire you to write hey there delilah pt 2

Answer 4

its pretty good i rate 7/10

Answer 5

you have really good content, and yes I would say you have talent.

but please please please please break it up into lines & add punctuation.

it throws the reader off.