I made my own song and posted it on youtube please check it out see if you like it and...?

Question

rate my sing from 1-10

and rate the song from 1-10

And tell me what I need to improve upon in anything...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHdFSkLB2A0

Answer 1

umm don't breathe in so deeply. You are off key and your words kind of slur together. I don't think it was good...sorry.  I would say your singing about a 3 and the song a 4...its wayy to repetitive.

Answer 2

Singing: 5

Song: 6

I couldn't really hear it that well, so next time you post something, try to make it louder. Also, I couldn't really tell what you said besides "do you know" because you didn't enunciate. Make sure you're speaking clearly. This song would probably be good with some background music.

Keep trying!

Answer 3

Nice Job!

Singing: 7

Song: 9

Work on pronouncing your words a little better, and takin less breaths, if possible. Other than that, it was nice!