I made this for the girl i love should i show it to her??

Question

its a video http://youtube.com/watch?v=d2ZcjUXtEHs please any help??

Answer 1

h**l no man you spelled a bunch of s**+.t wrong

plus its kinda g*y. im not just saying that to be funny. you can get this chick without being a bit.ch and trying some over the top romantic gesture. it comes off as being corny, like you got it from a movie. just be real and keep it pimpin and she'll come to you.

Answer 2

depends it is up to you tho

Answer 3

oh.

that is beautiful.

dont tell her.

show her.

if no girl thinks that is the sweetest think she has ever saw, i would be in shock.

if she doesnt love you for that i dont know what her problem is.  

best of luck.

EDIT:  i would send her an email of it or give her a link of it.

and say this is something a made for this girl that i truly love/like.

Answer 4

Fix the spelling, remove some of the smiley faces (We're happy, you're in love, we get it.) and I say show it to her. =)

Answer 5

I,m with joshtheG fix spelling, then send it... it is cool

Answer 6

I thought it might just be a few mistakes, so I was writing them down to help you out. It turned out to be a ton. If you show her this video, I have a hard time believing she won't think you're a r****d. Either that or you're much younger than I thought. Please fix the errors before you show it to her. Once it has been fixed, it will be so much better and sweet. I like it.

But this song -->dose<-- just the job (:

But this song does just the job. (:

I think -->you<-- the most beautiful person I have ever -->metin<-- my entire life. And ...

I think you're the most beautiful person I have ever met in my entire life and ...

Breathtaking is one word.

You are much more -->then<-- just a pretty face.

You are much more than just a pretty face.

You are my best friend -->witch<-- means ...

You are my best friend which means ...

-->When ever<-- I'm around you I'm...

Whenever I'm around you, I'm ...

Kinda should actually be "Kind of" but that's pretty accepted anyway.

-->Hear<-- I go ...

Here I go ...

-->Thers<-- no one ...

There's no one ...

Made my mistakes -->yet<-- you down ...

Made my mistakes, let you down ...

I can't hold on for -->to<-- long ...

I can't hold on for too long ...

-->Ramed<-- my -->hole<-- life in the ground.

Rammed my whole life in the ground.

I -->wont<-- watch out -->untill<-- you know.

I won't watch out until you know.

(Again) -->Hear<-- I go.

Here I go.

(Again) -->Thers<-- just no one ...

There's just no one ...

-->Youtube if you don't think is absolutely stunning then well, I'm sorry you must be g*y. (:<--

Youtube: If you don't think this is absolutely stunning, then well, I'm sorry, you must be g*y. (:

(Again) --> Hear<-- I go,

Here I go,

Leave a -->not<--

Leave a note

You can see right -->threw<-- me.

You can see right through me.

(Same chorus mistakes.)