Question:

I made this poem and I was wondering.?

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I'm kind of curios if it's good. Well I've made about 20 poems and this was my first poem. I made it About one year ago and I was 12 at the time.

Sorry I was to lazy to correct the little mistakes :)

saw a girl she was perfect to be idolized;

i anesthetized;

but i wanted most of the girls to materialize;

but she's the one the only one for me;

she's my energy;

]the first time i saw her was in elementary;

when i saw her eyes;

i was hypnotized;

but now i know she has a heart of an angel;

Im in a mess;

i am obsess;

with her;

who wouldn't;

couldn't;

now i realized i love her;

everyone would for sure;

but she ain't talkin' too me;

i don't lnow what to do;

didn't have a clue;

the sky is blue;

i don't know who;

i talk too;

my heart is crumblin;

bublin'

boilin'

in hot water;

now i'm in a cluster i match her;

but she's is way too smart to talk too;

she gets A's on her tests;

she's the best;

she is pulling me down to the ground;