I made this song my self?

Question

tell me weather its good or not or if i should add somthing ..thnx

verse 1 : she tells me the right to mi wrong;forced me to write this stupid song;makes fun of all my clothes;beats up the freggin hoes; shes bettur then any boy;cuz shes my favourite toy;shes like a lost sister; from another mister.IAmTheOneSoDearest,AllThoughIMayB... three CuzIKnowUrATrueFriend,AndIllFriendShip Will Never End

Answer 1

wow, these lyrics are really good. i would listen to the final song. :]

Answer 2

Eh....well, the hoes part is funny.

But overall it was pretty okay, I mean, I've heard much worse.

But you might want to consider spelling and grammar.

It was hard to understand.

Answer 3

yea it is  

Answer 4

It's hard to read.  

Answer 5

nice keep going through it need to add more on it,. and keep it up its a good work,.