I made this spell please tell me what u think???

Question

witches one and witches all

i ask a favor from you

to be a human when dry

and a mermaid when wet

with a tail that shines a deep, deep blue

just a tail, a beautiful tail

Gills, i do not need

powers i shall not have

only water on my legs

will transform me

please, give this gift to me

please if u think there needs to b anything added, or taken away, please tell, but dont b rude, or negative, its so mean, and not fair to me and t others

Answer 1

make sure to have protection if you do not want to get possessed.

Answer 2

I like the first half. It says what you want. I have a problem with the second half because mermaids have to breathe underwater somehow, so they do need gills.

How about?

Two legs to walk on land

A tail to propel me in the sea

grant me the power to transform

please give this gift to me

Answer 3

Lol...Wth?

Answer 4

Oy Vey!!!!!!  And I actually thought you were seriously considering spellcraft. Shame on me.

Answer 5

Cute, but don't expect it to work. ;-)

http://www.veoh.com/videos/v6239262sPcxY...

Answer 6

The incantation is great except for one thing. Witches have NOTHING to do with transforming you into a mermaid. Witches didn't write the spell on 43things.com. Somebody thought it was a cute idea, but I can guarantee you it wasn't a witch. I am not a teenager, I am much older than you think. I've been a practicing witch for many years and I am telling you the truth when I say that witches cannot physically transform your human body into a mermaid. You can choose not to believe me, that's your prerogative, but it won't make what I am saying any less true. Those that claim to have a spell, or claim to have really PHYSICALLY become a mermaid are simply not being truthful. Lying to you would be negative. I have not lied.