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I need a title for my poem!

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also your comments.

a star shines

in the dark night

over the windy moors

through the trees of blight

the sea crashing in

against the rocks over again

shimmering reflections upon the water

as the clouds open with rain

the warm setting of the sun

across the horizon line

holding you close in my arms

feelings so sublime

a kiss gently given

unto my heart so true

a moment frozen in time

when you whispered 'I love you'

10points for the best title!

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  1. how about "rubbish poem"??


  2. Hmmnnn...

    How about (this is hard by the way)...

    "Whispered Moments"

    or

    "Lingering Whispers"

    I want to attack directly the striking elements of your poem. I'm particular with the moment and the words that you whispered.

  3. well i don't have an idea to give a title. but why not just use it as a lyric song. with good melody,nice voice and a sweet text like that. it will really get into our soul  

  4. on a night with you..... i like the rhyme scheme by the way

  5. Joy

  6. Global Warming

  7. Just take one of the lines and invert the words

    like

    Frozen Moments


  8. Day, Night, Love

  9. I have a degree in English lit so Im gonna have to be honest and tell you the poem is really cheesy and awful it sounds like it was written by a 15 year old school girl.

  10. That poem is pretty nice....well i'm not good at making titles but here it goes....since...i assume its about love....i think a good title would be: Seasons of Romance

  11. Atmosphere. You seem to be describing a memorable moment !!!!!!

  12. I Love You or When You Told Me That You Love Me

    There basically what your poem is about - love

    it's a very nice poem and you should get some good titles

  13. Respect and peace to you my friend. Very nice poem....

    I would call that poem - 'Living for the Moment'.

  14. moonlight kiss

  15. 'I love you'

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