I need advice from a professional salesperson?

Question

I just opened a car detail shop and I am making a pamplet to show who I am and my prices. I really need work fast or i am goin under. As i have a tight budget. I need a paragragh to really intrigue people to get me to clean and detail their car. I really have to sell myself. I am looking for a pro to give me an example. Please help

Answer 1

shhhh i sent you an email, it is better than just one professionals point of view.

Answer 2

To the point. You need to advertise yourself in your local area, you need to print flyers to let people know you are the one they need...

10% off (or any % you may want to offer) on your first visit.

A Car is an investment that needs care and maintenance, make it last longer, make yourself feel Good about what you drive,

We can help you achieve this feeling. Make an appointment NOW and received(any little perk you are willing to provide).

Change the word arounds, take words, add words, this is just a jump start. also check your competition and see what they are doing, also Go out, be confident and tell your customers that you are the person they need for all their care care maintenance.  

Details really count  ;-)