I need feedback on this poem.?

Question

I was always told that I was great

The exemplar American Child

But you said you never cared

I always tried to impress you

Doing what you wanted

But you said you never cared

I learned to be independent

Striving on my own

But you said you never cared

You pushed and pushed to make me stronger

Not knowing that it only made me weak

Your harsh words penetrated my skin

Invading my thoughts within

So now that I am torn apart

And I can stand this no longer

I believe it’s your turn to say

You never cared.

Answer 1

why do poems always have to be sad?

why dont you make a happy poem.

this poem might be really good if youre a emo or a girl whos trying to kiss up trying to get those 10 points.

Answer 2

Angsty, lacks subtlety, very boring

Answer 3

I LOVE IT =]

love it.

love it.

alott !

Answer 4

i like it!

reminds me of unfit parents!

wich lets face it THERES WAY 2 MUCH OF THOSE

xD

Answer 5

I like it..

Answer 6

It is good but very plain and the meaning just stares you in the face. I have the same problem with my poems so i'm not trying to bash you.

Answer 7

i like it...the reader can fit it to what happing with them