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I need help in my english first language homework?

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Ive been given an assiginment to write a short descriptive piece of a place ive been to, tell me what u can imagine from my essay.

The doors opened by two invisible men would invite any stranger in. Ringing in your ears, would be a cheap playback of the same horrible music. Overpowering sweet scents of perfume would rush through your nostrils, as each salesman desperately sprays their product on your wrists. Following on the trail would lead you to an endless supply of clothing. Already worn, and tried by a thousand strangers. You see other humans, drenching themselves miserably in unobtainable desires like melancholy lords and amongst the crowd u see a friend or two.

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  1. sounds like a market place. All different salesmen spraying perfumes on u, secondhand clothes...


  2. In short--I see a Mall. One of the classic teen hangouts when they have nothing to do and money on their hands

    Even when they DON'T have money on their hands.

    The Invisible men are automatic doors, right?

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