I need help on a thesis statement?

Question

i already have an idea on what im going to write. i just dont now how to make a thesis. ive been told thee same thing over and over nad i still dont get it. well im going to write about how in revolution (in romania) the people had t wait in line for hours for food. theres a bit of comparison on how bak then it wasnt isnt to get things nad how we should appreciate life.

well hopefully this is enough. if not let me know and ill wrte to you personally more info. thanks help!!

Answer 1

your thesis should encompass, as much as you can, who, what, where, when and why. A good thesis explains the first 4 and asks why, or asserts it's going to explain why.

For instance, " It is clear that X, Y, and Z are the direct causes of (this sittuation) in (this place), direly affecting the livelihood of (these people)"

Answer 2

Compose a Thesis Statement

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