I need help on my book....(More detail in the inside)?

Question

Okay, I'm a writer. I been writing a lot of kinds of story. Now, I'm stuck on good title for the next chapter in my book. It's mostly about this hero girl has to go in a disguise to get into a contest to protect this rich 22 woman from a dangerous villain who threaten her life with a gun or a bomb. This villain is an idoit with choosing a device so it took a week to figure it out. This contest is a dance so the hero girl has to dance her way in to protect the people and she's partnered up with the 22 woman she has to protect. Even though hero girl no expert on dancing excet go with the flow and waltz. This hero girl does have super powers but no one knows about it. She had to use it otherwise she won't protect the 22 woman from death related. So, this hero girl is stuck dance when she's trying to fight the villain from killing the 22 woman. It's mostly about dances and saving the 22 woman's life. That's all I can give. Could you help me out what the title for this chapter should be? I want to use the title of Dance but it's too simple. So, could you make it more interesting for me? Please!

Answer 1

That story. Sounds sooo bad. lmao wow, um. Why do people on yahoo always try to write books before trying to improve their writing?

This whole question of yours was hard to understand, too. Is English your second language? Perhaps you should consider finding a writing forum in your native language and asking this to them?

Ask this again when you've got a firmer grasp on the language. I can't think of anything for something that sounds like it came from someone who made low C's in English.

Edit:

Alright, you didn't change anything, but since you asked I'll say this. You're mind is too chaotic. Chill. You definitely are the kind of person who needs to make out a list of what they want to happen when. Otherwise you'll move from topic to topic like an ADD kid on crack. I don't like the sound of your story, honestly, but whatever, do what you will.

It's just the title for the chapter, right? It can be something as simple as dance. It's the book title that has to be really catchy.

Answer 2

I would personally keep it simple and just go with 22. This is your decision though and I think when you are finished your title will come easier to you.. Good luck!

Answer 3

Umm.... I don't think i would ever read it.

Answer 4

Last Dance

Footwork

Safety Dance ( =P )

Answer 5

Okay, I'm a writer. I been writing a lot of kinds of story. Now, I'm stuck on good title for the next chapter in my book. It's mostly about this hero girl has to go in a disguise to get into a contest to protect this rich 22 woman from a dangerous villain who threaten her life with a gun or a bomb. This villain is an idoit with choosing a device so it took a week to figure it out. This contest is a dance so the hero girl has to dance her way in to protect the people and she's partnered up with the 22 woman she has to protect. Even though hero girl no expert on dancing excet go with the flow and waltz. This hero girl does have super powers but no one knows about it. She had to use it otherwise she won't protect the 22 woman from death related. So, this hero girl is stuck dance when she's trying to fight the villain from killing the 22 woman. It's mostly about dances and saving the 22 woman's life. That's all I can give. Could you help me out what the title for this chapter should be? I want to use the title of Dance but it's too simple. So, could you make it more interesting for me? Please!

that is a nice story i think the title is Secret Powers of the Hero girl