I need help on my thesis statement on school uniforms?

Question

personal i think school uniforms are a great idea,but I'm not sure how to make my thesis statement because my English teacher said that it should not be three points thesis statement,And I'm not for sure how to start my essay.{{How Should My Introduction Paragraph Be Written?}}

Answer 1

It is a great idea for schools to implement a policy on school uniforms because statistics show that students who wear uniforms make better grades, the male students aren't as distracted by what the female students are (or aren't) wearing, and students feel a sense of equality with one another as they are all wearing the same things and when students are at one with one another their confidence soars, which leads to doing better at school.  

Student uniforms helps with reducing the amount of bullying therefore the students who would normally be bullied now have a much better disposition while at school, which leads to a more healthy learning environment.  When a student feels less threatened at school, they can concentrate better which will lead to better grades.

The schools which have an enforced uniform policy have properly dressed students.  When teenage girls, who want to impress teenage boys dress inappropriately it causes a lot of distractions.  The girls are also envious on one another so unrest is caused in the classroom throughout the day, not only among the boys who are looking at the girls, but at the girls who are jealous of the girls getting the attention.

Also, rules are put into place in schools and states make laws to protect the less educated.  If parents don't have enough sense to properly dress their boys and girls, then maybe it's time for the schools and states to tell parents how to dress their children for in a society which dresses the same there is less to be distracted by therefore people in society will be more interested in what is really important; making a positive change in the lives of those around us.

Answer 2

These will help.

A list of debating points about Mandatory Public School Uniforms

http://schooluniforms-not.org/debates.ht...

http://histclo.com/schun/merit/schun-deb...

http://kids.lovetoknow.com/wiki/School_U...

http://wiki.idebate.org/index.php/Debate...

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Answer 3

YES. SOMEONE WHO LIKES UNIFORMS. xD Anyway...

First point of business: the thesis. Let's start with something plain and simple, "Uniforms are good." This will be the basis of your thesis because I'm assuming that's what you'll be writing about. Now we have to add fluff so that we can build upon it.

Students that wear uniforms tend to do better in school.

That's arguable, so don't use that one, but you get what I mean. Ummm... on second thought, I'll give you a better one.

Uniforms help students focus on school work instead of other students.

There we go. It's still hugely controversial, but we'll use it for example's sake. For your introduction you have to list all the main points you want to use. Don't say everything, because then what will you write about later?

Let's do a detailed outline: [this is what I would write if I were to write this essay.]

Thesis: Uniforms help students focus on school work instead of other students.

Introduction:

Definition of uniform; Difference between uniform and strict dress code

Use sentence: Students won't think about their clothes if someone else has picked for them.

So on and so forth.