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I need help with a conclusion for my 5 paragraph essay? also tell me what you think so far?

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Here is my essay:

Hello! My name is Alyssa. My personality like many others can be reflected upon by the type of job you have, the type of music you listen to, and the type of clothes you wear. I like to think of my personality in terms of my favorite things. Such as my favorite food, color, and animal. My favorite food being stuffed shells, my favorite color being purple, and my favorite animal being a monkey.

My favorite food is stuffed shells. I find it to fit my personality very well. As stuffed shells are filled with many things, such as cheese and spices, I am filled with emotions and moods. Just as stuffed shells make me feel comfortable when I eat them, I like to think that I make others around me feel comfortable when around me.

My favorite color is purple. According to history, purple is known to represent royalty, and I like to think very highly of myself. I also like to fantasize and daydream instead of being in the real world. Purple is a relaxing color, and I like to relax.

My favorite animal is a monkey. Monkeys are very crazy and wild, and at times I can be that way too. Monkeys are very sociable, and I love to talk and be around people. When monkeys scream and talk to each other, it kind of sounds like they are laughing, and I like to laugh.

And now i am having trouble with the conclusion. Please help and tell me what you think of it. I am in tenth grade. this is for English! :)

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  1. u better put me as best answer i already tould u it was good on the phone!!!!!! please i need the 10 pts!!!

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