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I need help with an ending to this play!?

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ok i have a play and i REALLY need a good ending to it.

ok here goes; OK there are two creepy little girls like the ones that wear like tutus and carry around a creepy doll and stuff like that and so one older and one younger, and they live in an old abandoned house in secrecy (like they dont go to school and stuff and they only go outside sometimes at night to get food) so one of the neighbor thought they saw something suspicious in there one night so they keep stopping by the house and eventually they call the cops. OK so the cops go in and they find the girls and find out they didnt go to school n stuff so the little sister is trying to set free from the cop's grip and she punches him or something of that effect and they take her to juvie and they put the older sister with foster parents.

she hates

everyone

everything

and so they make her go to a public school and so i hve this one scene planned out where she walks in and everyone is looking at her and one dude goes "woah" and with no emotion at all on her face she just knocks all of his books out of his hands and keeps walking LOL so anyway she goes there for a while and blahdy blahdy blah some stuff will happen and then like she has never felt any emotions except for pain, sadness lonliness.... so and so

and she begins to like this one guy and she finally runs to his house to tell him that and she is happy crying (awwww) and so she gets there and it turns out he was playing soccer and he had a concussion or something and she went to the hospital to see him and tell him (oh yeah and she has alot of flashbacks) and so he opens his eyes and he doesnt even remember who she IS and she is crying again.

BUT I HAVE NOTHING AFTER THAT SO I NEED LIKE BUNCHES OF HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU LIKE SO MUCH IF YOU READ THIS, THANKS!!!

(PS u dont HAVE to like the play, but please, just help me with the ending ^^)

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  1. Fast forward 10 or 15 years. She has just got  her doctorate and is assigned to the hospital, where the young man is kept, having never recovered his memory.

    His family has abandoned him.

    She cures him and they develop a romance.

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  2. Do NOT start even writing the script until you have ALL the major plot points (especially the ending) in your head.

    And learn to use grammar correctly if you want to write anything.  

  3. too many gaps. good base now make it realistic and believable. Say they were lost in the fostercare system and were home schooled. Get taken out of a bad home sisters seperated then when she finds a great home gets a boyfriend and her sister is to join them to be addopted the foster parents will crash  

  4. All I can think of is the ending of The Invisible (great movie - don't know if you've seen it, though, so I won't ruin it.)

    Hmm... a few options could be:

    1. The girl commits suicide. I know that's depressing, but hey, it could be a good ending. And then you could have the younger sister living life to the fullest because of what happened to her older sis.

    2. She could pretend she doesn't know him either, and then could introduce herself/talk to him/make him see that she's a great person despite what everyone else thinks.)

    3. On her way from running out of the hospital, she runs into someone. It could be another guy or a helpful psychologist or even a higher power (if you're going for a supernatural ending.)

    4. The guy in the hospital could be the guy she likes' twin brother! Haha, totally kidding.

    That's all I got. I hope inspiration comes!

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