I need help on editing them and naming them and any tips or hints that can help me with poetry.
The first one:
Your everything I could be.
Every thing I am.
Everything that is mine is yours.
Mind, body and soul.
You saved me from the darkness,
That was my life.
I was teetering on the edge,
Ready to fall.
But it was your deep, dark amber eyes that
Caught me.
When I fell.
The slow beating of my fragile heart.
I slyly glimpse at your long muscles under your bronze-colored skin.
Your hair laying close to your face.
Your long fingers dancing across the desk.
So may things I would say to you.
But all I need is 3 words
3 beautiful,beautiful words.
But before I reach for your heart,
You shyly come and grasp
My ivory hand.
You leaned down,
Whisper in my ear,
“I love you, for always.â€Â
and the next one:
Something alights deep within thy soul when the sun touches thy skin and lights the way home but alas the darkness can be most welcoming even for those touched by the suns rays.
Thanks!
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