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Question

The DuBois early Childhood center is a facility that is friendly and doesnt cost much. We have a specialized staff and a commitment to serving the intire community.

The most effective revision of this sentence would end with which group of word?

1. a facility that is friendly and doesn't cost much either.

2. a facility that is not costly or unfriendly.

3. a facility that is friendly and inexpensive.

4. a friendly and not very costly facility.

5. a facility both friendly and not costly.

Answer 1

I would use neither.  I would go with..."The DuBois Early Childhood Center is a facility that believes that all children deserve high quality, loving care at a price all parents can afford.  We have a specialized staff that is committed to serving the entire community of (name your town or area)."  Good luck!

Answer 2

Answer 3 is the correct ending for the revised sentence.

Answer 3

#3

Answer 4

3

Answer 5

The answer is #3

Answer 6

3 for sure!

Answer 7

i believe 3 is the best and sound most professional

Answer 8

If it's a multiple choice question on a test or homework assignment, #3.  The problem with 1, 2, 4, and 5 is that you have the word "cost" or "costly."  That will grab the reader's subliminal attention no matter how carefully they read it.  

Matt

Answer 9

Out of the endings you presented #3 is the best option, as all the others contain negative connotations. I would possibly alter number 3 as well to:

- a facility that is friendly and affordable

You need something that is phrased in a totally positive manner.

Answer 10

number 3 it is ^^

Answer 11

I like number 3.

But if you need something different, I have a suggestion, "DuBois Early Child Care Facility: One Child, Endless Possibilities, With Inexpensive Cost."

gOOD Luck

Answer 12

#3

Maybe instead of saying inexpensive, you could say low-priced or something like that. Affordable is nice, too.

Answer 13

i agree #3