I need help with this story im writing ?

Question

well mi story is about this nerdy shy girl who is living on her own for the first time and she is also starting collage well anyways her secret crush is driving her home because its raining so i wanted to know what do u think should happen while he is driving her home?

Answer 1

Quailgirl,

You need a lot of help with your writing.

I'm going to fix what you've written to start out with.

What you wrote:

well mi story is about this nerdy shy girl who is living on her own for the first time and she is also starting collage well anyways her secret crush is driving her home because its raining so i wanted to know what do u think should happen while he is driving her home?

The way it should have looked:

Well, my story is about this nerdy shy girl who is living on her own for the first time. She is also starting college and her secret crush is driving her home because it's raining. I wanted to know what you think should happen while he is driving her home.

You have to be careful with punctuation and spelling. ' I ' is always a capital letter, 'its' is another word that can be deadly when writing to a publisher. A cat can l**k its paws, but it won't go outside if it's raining out. The last sentence is not really a question, it's a statement.

Don't take offense here, that's not my intention. If you want to write and have people take you seriously, you need to bone up on the craft and really take it to heart. Notice that no one else before me even commented on your spelling and punctuation.

PJ M

Answer 2

It really depends on what you want the story to be, where it's going to go - do they live happily ever after? Is he even remotely interested? Why is he driving her home anyway? What does she like about him?

Ask yourself those questions, and I'm sure something will come to mind.

Answer 3

Perhaps they could converse a little bit get to know each other. If the character isn't aware of the others feeling for him it may complicate things though. Use your gut instinct and think about what you would do if you were in a situation I'll tell you I'd be so happy my crush is driving me home that I'd be speechless. But just use your imagination and you'll never go wrong after all fiction is never wrong!

Good Luck!

Answer 4

Three things need to happen at this point in the story:

1  Ninjas MUST attack.

2  The Russian premier really ought to be assassinated.

3  The secret crush's dead grandmother should arise from her grave to seek retribution for her unnatural death.

How old is the secret crush?  Because I think it would be really cool if he was either 78 years old, or else twelve, and his feet can barely reach the pedals to drive.

Answer 5

something big and memerable should happen

this will help make a good romantic novel

because love is about gran gestures

sooo something like, he has her do something crazy for the first time in her life

like they go skinny dipping lol

or they go paint graffiti

or they go dance in the rain!!

yeahh..okay hope i helped:)

Answer 6

I think that she should be quite shy and both of them will touch the radio, feel a frisson and then things will be awkward but they both like each other. Your typical love story scene.