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I need help writing a conclusion...this is all i got so far...PLEASE HELP MEE?

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THIS IS ALL I GOT SO FAR

They have six legs,crunch when you squish them,and make most girls scream.If you guessed cockroaches then you were correct.They always make walking to the kitchen at night a hassle because you never know what you're gonna step on.Most people have had experiences with cockaroaches.I've had to many to count!I guess they're attracted to my perfume

I remember when my family and i went to key west for the weekend and on our way back home we stopped to get something to eat.We went to sonic and i ordered an oreo sonic blast.After we parked,and went through the long,excruciating task of giving everybody what they ordered,I got a straw,and stuck it inside the sonic blast.I took one fast sip!After that moment,i never looked at a straw in the same way ever again.

Surprisingly,a roach scampered menacingly up the straw with ill intentions right before i took the big sip!I could feel this squirmy little thing swimming aroung in my mouth and at first i thought it was just a piece of ice.After the first bite i heard this big crunch sound,and then i felt something squirt out of the misterious piece of ice.I immediatley spit it all out.Once i looked down and saw what had been swimming in my mouth for like three seconds,i started screaming.I was so discusted!I threw up about five times,it was like something out of a horror movie,chunks flying everywhere.

finnaly,after i was done with my little panic atack,I decided to go back to sonic and start pointing fingers.I told them what happend and some of the workers even started laughing.I was so mad and frustrated,nobody was taking me seriously.After they saw that i was litteraly about to blow,they said that they where extremly sorry and that they would give me a re-fill.Wow a refill!

I DONT KNOW WHAT I SHOULD WRITE FOR MY CONCLUSION...THE ESSAY IS DUE TOMMOROW AND IM OUT OF CREATIVITY JUICE...CAN SOMEONE PLEASSEEEE HELP ME

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most people have had experieces with cockroackes

think about your own experiences with cockroaches:seeing them, killing them, being scared of them, etc

now write to describe your experience with a cockroach.Be sure to include details you think will interest your readers

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  1. This isn't bad!  Here's an ending:

    But, hey, I survived to write about it!

    By the way, clean up your spelling, punctuation and capitalization.


  2. I guess cockroach's have become so popular that even serving them threw a  straw at a restaurant is normal...It is a known fact the FDA has a certain limit for how many bugs  can be in your food, before it is not considered edible. Umm, they really do provide a certain amount of protein and are considered a delicacy in some cultures.

    I really wish you good luck...good read though

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