I need help writting a little letter?

Question

I am mexican and my english isnt perfect, so I'll be gratefully if someone review this little letter, thanks in advance:

I have reviewed the job offer you have published on OCC, and I believe I have the necessary expertise to be considered in your selection process.

Before you take a look to my curriculum, I show you a brief about some of my skills that could be useful to consider in your revision.

• Experience in the coordination of projects related to e-Learning, e-Business and Web development.

• Knowledge about the Internet trends and its advantages

• Knowledge in the use, installation and administration of LMS’s (Learning Management Systems) like Blackboard, Moodle, Dokeos, Webct, Sumtotal, etc.

• Ideas and knowledge in Web Marketing, Interactive Marketing and e-business.

• A major and a Master Degree in Management

• Diplomas in e-Learning, Web Design, Quality and Web Marketing.

• Web Programming (HTML, PHP, Mysql, CSS, XML, ASP)

• Graphic Design (Fireworks, Flash, Dreamweaverm, Illustrator, Photoshop, etc.)

With no more comments by the moment I thank you the time you take to review my information.

Answer 1

i edited a few things(very minor altercations):

I have reviewed the job offer you have published on OCC, and I believe I have the necessary expertise to be considered in your selection process.

Before you take a look at my curriculum, I will show you a brief about some of my skills that could be useful to consider in your revision.

• Experience in the coordination of projects related to e-Learning, e-Business and Web development.

• Knowledge about the Internet trends and its advantages

• Knowledge in the use, installation and administration of LMS’s (Learning Management Systems) like Blackboard, Moodle, Dokeos, Webct, Sumtotal, etc.

• Ideas and knowledge in Web Marketing, Interactive Marketing and e-business.

• A major and a Master Degree in Management

• Diplomas in e-Learning, Web Design, Quality and Web Marketing.

• Web Programming (HTML, PHP, Mysql, CSS, XML, ASP)

• Graphic Design (Fireworks, Flash, Dreamweaverm, Illustrator, Photoshop, etc.)

With no more comments for the moment, I thank you for the time you have taken to review my information.

Answer 2

I have examined the job offer which you advertised on OCC, and I believe that I have the necessary expertise to be considered in your selection process.

Before you peruse my CV, here is a brief account of some of the skills and qualifications that I have acquired which you might find useful in your assessment.

• Experience in the coordination of projects related to e-Learning, e-Business and Web development.

• Knowledge about the Internet trends and its advantages

• Knowledge in the use, installation and administration of LMS’s (Learning Management Systems) like Blackboard, Moodle, Dokeos, Webct, Sumtotal, etc.

• Ideas and knowledge in Web Marketing, Interactive Marketing and e-business.

• A major and a Master Degree in Management

• Diplomas in e-Learning, Web Design, Quality and Web Marketing.

• Web Programming (HTML, PHP, Mysql, CSS, XML, ASP)

• Graphic Design (Fireworks, Flash, Dreamweaverm, Illustrator, Photoshop, etc.)

I hope that you find this list interesting, and I thank you for taking the time to look at the information that I am submitting. If you need further clarification, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully,

PS: I have not changed anything in the list of your skills as I am no expert in computer terminology and jargon, but I have corrected your English and altered sentences that would seem strange to those who will read your letter.

I take it that you will include your CV with this letter, otherwise you should use the following sentence for your second paragraph:

Before submitting a full CV, I am providing is a list of the skills and qualifications that I have acquired which you might find useful in your assessment.