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Question

this is the first time i've actually written a poem.

it just came to me -__-

if something doesnt make sense or doesnt flow please tell me, i'd want it to be nice...it is my first hahaa.

and also i want to know if people can understand the story behind the poem? you know?

please and thank you.

and i dont have a title -__-

"hey baby boo.

i miss you.

thinking about the things that we've been through.

a month is here.

where i've shed more than a tear.

scared of facing a certain fear.

where are you?

where am i?

are we ever going to combine?

i just dont know,

we need to talk

i'm wondering if i should

stay or walk.

i see your face

i close my eyes

i feel my heart paining inside.

you look at me,

i'm wondering maybe

if you apologized before

i wouldnt be heading to the door.

you hold me near,

whispering in my ear,

"stay with me here,

i love you, my dear"

i look at you,

with questions in my mind

thinking about the second try...

are we going to make it through?

or will you fail me again

at the price of two?"

(i dunno if the last stanza or whatever was good... "/ it does and doesnt feel right...? lol)

Answer 1

In the short span of the existence of the true Republic of the Philippines, several changes already became evident. This in noticed in the new Filipino songs, in the newspapers, in the speeches, and even in the television programs.  ano ang ibig sabhin na may kasamang paliwanag