I need some constructive criticism!?

Question

I wrote this - maybe a little wordy? What do you think? Its pretty hard to come up with twenty words for plastic...

Haunting

Plastic pumpkins stare with yellow eyes;

trash bag ghosts crinkle in the breeze;

composite acrylic gravestones glow

with acid green bulbs, tethered

to a vinyl sided house

by an extension cord.

Plastic spiders dangle on clear fishing line

from glow-in-the-dark polyester webs

while children in masks and wigs

reach for cellophane-wrapped candy

in a black bake-lite bowl

made to look like a cauldron.

Molded rats and styrofoam skulls look on

while a plastic CD spins sound effects from

speakers with lucite casings.

Next week,

the sturdy trash bins will bulge

with leftover holiday

until a man wearing gloves crushes it all

into a landfill grave that someday

will came back to haunt us.

(Copyrighted)

Answer 1

Hmmmm a bit too serious too really capture halloween. But it was very good and put a picture in my head.