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I need some ideas for a novel I'm currently writing.

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The novel is about a girl named Tasia (short for Anastasia) and her father is a very important doctor and their family is very rich. Her mother died when she was younger, although it never really explains what of or when exactly, but anyways, her father is an alcoholic and he beats his children constantly. No one really seems to catch on though because his kids try and hide it because they're embarassed. So everyone at school thinks that she's perfect. And her brother ends up comitting suicide because of the beatings, and so she's an only child now. And then she starts dating this guy, who everyone thinks is perfect for them, only he's abusive, and she doesn't really notice that anything is odd about it because that's how she saw her father treat her mother. And so she keeps dating him, and no one knows that she's being abused by either guys. And she tries to lie to herself because she doesn't want to admit it either. In the end of the book she tries to kill herself by taking way too many sleeping pills, but after she's already taken the pills she realizes that she doesn't want to kill herself but it's too late and she dies anyways, but what I need is some complications to the plot. Like stuff that could happen to her. Any ideas? Thanks for your help. BTW, the title is Being Tasia Fisher. It's kind of a working title. (Also she hates her father)

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  1. wow depressing lol

    sounds good so far

    maybe add some happy stuff lol


  2. sounds good. the ending is sort of like romeo and juliet

  3. Awsome story lulz,

    well put that she have had some awfull friends that back stab her and that one of her bestfriends have found out the secret that her boyfriend and father beat her. Due to her best friend being jealous that she have a "cute" boyfriend and a "rich" life she tells the whole school. Tasia gets embarrassed she is about to commit suicide "first suicide" but then a boy saves her. The boy name is ____[blank you can add a name is your story =] ] and he knows what happen and what her backstabbing best friend did and he doesn't judge her of what happen because he used to be abused by his parents and he used to abuse his girlfriends but stopped. They go for a date and they start getting along and fell in love{or what you want to add lol} and her boyfriend finds out and hits Tasia and the friend finds out and try to support her all these times but from being teased at school she cant take it which leads her to be suicidal

    GooD LucK =]

    these are my ideas you can add them =]

  4. I HONESTLY think that is GREAT! It sounds like a great book to become and i would def. buy that book!

    Maybe like everyone (other than a few friends) thinks that she is a rich b*tch... and they all talk about her and spread rumors about her.

    And they all hate her... And her boyfriend is dating somebody else on the side...

    STAR FOR YOU!!!!

  5. - she discovers her mom isn't dead

    - the abusive guy turns out to be a nice guy after all and was just hiding it because of his reputation

    -  she finds a boy best friend and fall in love him but hes g*y

    - her dad got kidnapped

    -  her brother isn't dead after all, its just that he faked it so he could runaway

    - she has a arranged marriage

    - she finds out that her dad was a teenage rockstar

    P.S i like your plot anyway !

  6. I think the plot seems complicated enough.  Wow.  Just keep going and see where the story takes you.

  7. pesky people who try to be her friend...

    the guy from afar who is attracted to her and is actually a nice guy...

    the lies she invents to cover her father and bf abuses... excuses for hurting herself...


  8. wow i want to read it even though i now know the ending.

    Every once in awhile she writes in her journal about the abuse.

    you should have a twist where there is a friend that is a guy who has been there all along but she didnt realise it. and she finds out she loves him after she tottaly overdosed.  

    You should have it where the mom died of  overdose too but instaed of sleeping pills,  pain pills but the father made evryone believe it was kindney issues. plus he tried and tried to get her to go the doctor but she refused.

    Also at the end for the funeral u should have the guy stayed after to say bye privately.

    as and as afterwards. u should have her dad being exposed. they did an autopsy on her and found bruises and scars plus the overdose info.  So they check out the house and find blood on the wall, and her journal of abuse.  so they arrest the dad....

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