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well i am entering a contest and,well im not going to explain all the details....but you have to write a song about the jonas brothers.....you had to inclue several words and they are in there!!!!

i already posted 1 song...but im going to post this one and tell me what yall think.

thanksssss.

Means Everything To Me

You don't know how much

these boys mean to me.

Oh, their music setes me free.

Don'd care how the tune goes,

they send chills from my head

dwon to my toes.

woah, oh.

They are the piece that completes me,

the air all around me,

the love that surrounds me,

the joy thats within me,

but above all things,

they mean ever-ything to me.

sha-bop-sha-bop ao, wo-ah.

Now some people out there,

dont even have a clue.

when i say jonas,

they're like who?

Some see kevin

he's wearing a scarf.

They're like "ew,

thats gunna make me barf!"

Some see joe.

he's wearing purple.

They're like "Haha,

He looks like Erkel!"

Some think they should just make their way out of hollwood.

but i say,

sha-bop-sha-bop,

no!no!no!NO!

They are the piece that completes me,

the air all around me,

the love that surrounds me,

the joy thats within me,

but above all things,

they mean ever-ything to me.

Some call me crazy,

but these guys are so

amazing.

They;ve changed who I really am,

Wo-ah, They mean ev-er-ything,

To me.

[sp tell me what you think!!

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  1. Very good!!

    Is that it or is there more?

    I like what I have read so far.

    Good luck


  2. to be honest i hate the jonas brothers and that wasnt very good i couldnt imagine some1 SINGING that sorry :-\

  3. I think its great!

    But don't use this part:

    Now some people out there,

    dont even have a clue.

    when i say jonas,

    they're like who?

    Some see kevin

    he's wearing a scarf.

    They're like "ew,

    thats gunna make me barf!"

    Some see joe.

    he's wearing purple.

    They're like "Haha,

    He looks like Erkel!"

    Some think they should just make their way out of hollwood.

    but i say,

    sha-bop-sha-bop,

    no!no!no!NO!

    use something else, maybe something like this:

    The fans know who Mufassa is,

    dj danga the middle one

    not to mention the President in '38

    Jonas fans stick together,

    know all the facts and quotes.

    & we all sing along:

    sha-bop-sha-bop ao, wo-ah.

    Good luck on winning!

    It sounds great!

    =D

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