I need some poetic minds..?

Question

i want to show this guy how much i really care about him.. and how much i want to be with him.. i want to tell him that no matter what.. ill wont give up on him... no matter how much it hurts... i wanna write something in an origami strawberry... but i dont know what to write.. anybody?

Answer 1

i will be with you untill the stars fall out of the sky

Answer 2

strawberry fields forever

Answer 3

I can  help you out but what is an origami strawberry?  Just simply write it out in very nice hand writing on a lovely plain peace of paper this way he will know that you mean it with out all the tizz.  how is this: but you be the judge and do the strawberry thing if you want hun.

you write the words cos I think you sound like you are pretty arty.  You know what is in your heart without it sounding to cheesy. But here is something I wrote especially for you:

I thought of you today

and i felt a smile  

when i remembered

you make my day worthwhile.

It doesn't matter what it takes

I know how it feels

when your heart breaks

I thought of you today

and how it could be

when I remembered

what you mean to me

lol pale blue panda

Answer 4

i don't know my poem would be suitable for an origami strawberry but here it is anyway

Pine Trees

My love is not red

it is green

Evergreen

it remains green through the blazing red

it remains green thorough the billowing brown

it remains green through the biting white

it remains green and true

even as Demeter awakens anew

My love is green

Evergreen