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I need to finish my poem asap. the part i need help is at the end!!!!?

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its called Sweet as Candy

Candy will never be to sweet,but i know something that can beat the sweet sensation of the candy you all love to eat,and yes it is free,it is called love,sure you can't eat it or buy it at the store ,but when you feel it you know when it happens when you look her in the eyes.This is how i felt when.............

and i cant think of anything to finish it!!!!please help...asap!!!!

o ya its for my cousins wedding!!!

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  1. Call that a 'poem,' shame on you!


  2. when....I saw you two together. Better than candy is what you have. Love. That beats all.

  3. Candy will never be too sweet,

    But I know something that can beat

    The sweet sensation of the candy you all love to eat,

    And yes, it is free;

    It is called love.

    Sure, you can't eat it,

    Or buy it at the store,

    But when you feel it, you know when it happens,

    When you look into her eyes,

    This is how I felt when first I met you,

    When I first held you,

    When I first kissed you,

    Sweetie, I love you.

    I'm not a very good poet, I'm afraid. :P But I tried.

  4. ....I got the cream filled surprise

    NOW it's a poem

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