I need to write a narrative/essay..any suggestions?

Question

I am trying to apply to a scholarship course. But, in order to do that, I basically need to write a narrative paragraph or essay on why I am better than everyone else, and why I should get into the course over everyone esle. Of course, I will not be the only person in the course, but you get the idea. I'm not good at bragging about myself. I've also heard that the people who read these over don't like seeing the word "I" too many times, if at all. Any suggestions? Thanks in advance!

Answer 1

Write a list of the good qualities you have that want to put forward.  Then put them in outline form.  Then write your narrative.

You will have to curtail your use of the word I.  Notice that you've used it or a form of it 9 times just in the paragraph you wrote asking your question.

You could write for example..  I like corn.  I like potatoes.  I like meat.   Or...  you could write, I enjoy a meal that includes corn, meat and potatoes.

They want to hear how you will use the education the scholarship will provide to help humanity or make a difference in the lives of others.

Answer 2

Describe the things you have achieved, focussing on your activities and especially the outcomes.  Minimise references to your skills and abilities, but make sure these are understood by letting them be implied by your descriptions.

Answer 3

well sometimes those things want like a story that changed ur life.  those are always interesting to write but improvise a little. THEY WANT YOU TO BRAG!

Answer 4

When I am asked such a question I usually refer to past jobs, travelling and other experiences that have taught me a lesson or lessons. The qualities you develop in a job like patience, flexibility or teamwork are things you can write down as reasons as to why you are better than others. Of course, these ones are very common things to write down but I am sure you can tell of an event in your life that taught you a lot. Alternatively, you can also start off by telling them your IT skills, talents and extra-curricular achievements. This is the best way I can explain it. Do not be overly modest about your qualities. Brag but do not be over the top.

Answer 5

I would write more about what a great opportunity this would be for you and how it would better your life. Also about what it is that you would use the course for to make sure it goes to good use and benefit others. You are right, dont' overuse the word 'I"